HAPPY FATHERS DAY!

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It's Fathers day!
Crap.


Why do I say this..?Well,because.....It's because of my father's present.I was supposed to sing him a song....BUT,I could not find the karaoke music of the song he wants.Besides,he asked for it a week before Father's day...It's called "Viejo,my querido viejo".And I was supposed to sing it to my grandfather too.Oh,God...

So,to improvise(is this how you write it?) i decided to give them a poem.Yes,a poem.I may not seem the poem type,I know.But I didn't have a choice.

So i did it.My mother says it is really good.Of coure,that is her.I thought it was WAY to mushie.XD I don't know what to do.

Well,at least I finished his.Now I have to come up another one for my grandfather.:nuu:

So...any suggestions?C'mon,I am not good at poems.I need all the help I can get.

Great...now i want to write a poem.I DID NOT MAKE THIS POEM,THANK YOU.If you do not understand spanish,well,though luck.

Tus manos son mi caricia,
mis acordes cotidianos.
Te quiero porque tus manos
trabajan por la justicia.

Si te quiero es porque sos
mi amor,mi complice y todo
y en la calle codo a codo
somos mucho mas que dos.

Tus ojos son mi conjuro
contra la mala jornada.
Te quiero por tu mirada
que mira y siembra futuro.

Tu boca que es tuya y mía,
tu boca no se equivoca.
Te quiero porque tu boca
sabe gritar rebeldía.

Si te quiero es porque sos
mí amor,mí acomplice y todo
y en la calle codo a codo
somos mucho mas que dos.

Y por tu rostro sincero
y tu paso vagabundo
y tu llanto por al mundo
porque sos pueblo te quiero.

Y porque amor no es aureola
ni cándida moraleja
y porque somos pareja
que sabe que no está sola.

Te quiero en mí paraíso,
es decir,que en mí paíz
la gente vive feliz
aunque no tenga permiso.

Si te quiero es porque sos
mí amor,mi complice y todo
y en la calle codo a codo
somos mucho más que dós

Mario Benedetti-uruguayo

Yes,it is very long.Yes,it is a love poem.Deal.

Ugh....you cought me in a bad day....I'm felling so horrible right now....Any sugeestions on THAT to?

Sigh,here's your quote:Be who you are and say what you feel...because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.-Dr.Seuss.

See ya later,guys.
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mmmh SALIVA SOUND TASTY!!